Nadia, you've read the poem well, with expression and feeling. What you've not done is cut your three poems into one poem. Use parts of the three to make one. Hmm.....
I really liked your poem and I enjoyed wacthing your poem too Nadia! You forgot to cut your three poems into one poem.
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Nadia, you've read the poem well, with expression and feeling. What you've not done is cut your three poems into one poem. Use parts of the three to make one. Hmm.....
I really liked your poem and I enjoyed wacthing your poem too Nadia! You forgot to cut your three poems into one poem.
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